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windandwaterOMG I HAVE JUST READ POSSIBLY THE WORST LEMON I HAVE EVER SEEN. OH GOD IT BURNS IT WAS HET* AND A CROSSOVER AND OOC AND JUST SO... THE AUTHOR DIDN'T EVEN TRY TO MAKE IT SEXY AT ALL. AUGH. AND IT HAD BAD PUNCTUATION AND GRAMMAR WHICH IS LIKE POURING SALT INTO THE WOUND.
* Note: The fact that it was het, by itself, is not squicky. Yes, I DO read more than yaoi. But this? This was just horrid.
* Note: The fact that it was het, by itself, is not squicky. Yes, I DO read more than yaoi. But this? This was just horrid.
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Date: 2006-06-23 12:56 am (UTC)Gimme so I can give it to unsuspecting victims. >:D
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Date: 2006-06-23 01:10 am (UTC)Just warning you beforehand so you don't try to bludgeon me later.
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Date: 2006-06-23 01:12 am (UTC)Worse comes to worse, I'll feed it to someone in cfudbadfic. >D
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Date: 2006-06-23 01:26 am (UTC)http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2766427/1/
... the "lemon" is in chapter five. Please do feel free to run back here screaming and gnashing your teeth in agony. =D
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Date: 2006-06-23 02:46 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2006-06-23 01:00 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-06-23 01:11 am (UTC)Doesn't he though?(no subject)
Date: 2006-06-23 01:45 am (UTC)He seriously does. The whole positioning of his shoulders and everything. Wow.
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Date: 2006-06-23 01:40 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-06-23 01:46 am (UTC)And really. His face, the positioning of his shoulders, where his arms lead down too...complete and total wank-age happening.
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Date: 2006-06-23 01:48 am (UTC)I'm pretty sure one of my friends has an icon with that same pic.... yeah, here it is, eleventh down in the right column (http://www.livejournal.com/allpics.bml?user=zerotwofan). XDDDD
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Date: 2006-06-23 01:56 am (UTC)Man, the creators had to have known what they were doing. I mean...no one is that OBLIVIOUS. Granted, this could be the pervy observation of depraved yaoi fans, but I just don't think so. *G*
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Date: 2006-06-23 02:23 am (UTC)that was horrid! she strips, he unzips, she flips, and he just poof! does her.
*points at icon* nuff said.
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Date: 2006-06-23 02:31 am (UTC)... MY GOD DON'T BE SO CLINICAL AND PUNCTUATE PROPERLY GODDAMMIT.
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Date: 2006-06-23 02:32 am (UTC)That last line kind of summed it up for me.
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Date: 2006-06-23 02:46 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-06-23 03:45 am (UTC)But then Cloud seems to be labotomized from the little I read
DK
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Date: 2006-06-23 03:55 am (UTC)*zomg glomping you now!*
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Date: 2006-06-23 04:30 am (UTC)I'm tempted to get a FF.N account just to bash this person's head into a wall.
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Date: 2006-06-23 06:56 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-06-23 11:48 pm (UTC)