Wow, look, I reply to you on your own LJ for a change. I'm here courtesy of askerian's fic pimping.
I don't really know why I ever started reading this little arc thing, because dead Heero should have sent me screaming in the other direction, with ears covered and "la la la la"ing all the way...
Ahem. ANYWAY.
I thought it was very poignant...the description of Heero's touches, the way Duo suffered through the little pains of the untangling just for the joy of knowing he could "feel" Heero in that way. *nods*
Hmmm I'm getting long winded here. The implied things are what I liked the most. Heero's voice trailing off, indicating how much the action had tired him.
Yes, the ending line, very touching. I think what left the biggest impression on me...was the impression on the pillow, that Heero was there enough to touch Duo and to leave an indentation.
Now the Big Question - did it make me cry? *cringe* No? It did, though, twist at my heart, so kudos for that. Does that count?
I'll stop now before the review becomes longer than your fic shaped thing.
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Date: 2004-10-27 11:08 am (UTC)I don't really know why I ever started reading this little arc thing, because dead Heero should have sent me screaming in the other direction, with ears covered and "la la la la"ing all the way...
Ahem. ANYWAY.
I thought it was very poignant...the description of Heero's touches, the way Duo suffered through the little pains of the untangling just for the joy of knowing he could "feel" Heero in that way. *nods*
Hmmm I'm getting long winded here. The implied things are what I liked the most. Heero's voice trailing off, indicating how much the action had tired him.
Yes, the ending line, very touching. I think what left the biggest impression on me...was the impression on the pillow, that Heero was there enough to touch Duo and to leave an indentation.
Now the Big Question - did it make me cry? *cringe* No? It did, though, twist at my heart, so kudos for that. Does that count?
I'll stop now before the review becomes longer than your fic shaped thing.